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The new year day is a traditional festival in china,every family had been preparing to new year's things,such as, all kinds of foods, give people's gifts and together with families and friends.so when spring festival coming,we will be very busy.however, the spring party is important to entertain activities in every family,but some people thought Spring Festival Gala is canceled ,this problem is a great arise controversy .How should we do deal with it? In my opinion, the spring festival gala is a symbol culture in china ,it is a spring that China become more and more strong, and it also brought about some happiness, all families could together watching TV is so good,because we can talking with others people,and it will be promote during our emotion,the life is going to more nice.The spring festival gala is like to a warm mother to give us love.Are you think so it?
