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拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；采用了适当的衔接手法，层次清晰；句式灵活多变，再加强从句的使用会更棒。
In China the new year day is a traditional festival ,each family had been preparing to new year's things,such as, a great variety of foods, give person gifts and together with families and friends.so when spring festival is coming,we will be extremely busy. however, the spring party is important to entertain activities in every family,but some people thought Spring Festival Gala is canceled ,this problem was raise controversy .How should we do deal in it? In my opinion, the spring festival gala is a culture symbol in china ,it is a spring that China become more and more strong, and it also brought about some happiness, all families could together watching TV is so good,because we can talk with others people,and it will be promoted during our emotion,the life is going to more nice.The spring festival gala is like to a gentle mother to give us love.Are you think so it?
