高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

从句使用稍显不足，注意个别句子错误；文章层次较为清晰；文章用词太过单一，文章拼写错误比较多。

In the poss time ,my hometomn is very pool .the house is so low and the street is so ,however,people feel very happy ,we lived in there feel comfeterbal ，we look the shy is bule and clean,the river had many fish ,it looks so clean . Now,the low house is fade away ,instead in the light and high house ,the streat became white ,and the streat have many car .becuse of then ,the river become more and more dertly ，the shy become more and more black ，in river‘s fish is die away 。 my hometomn become terrybal ，what can we do for our hometomn ！