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nowadays,environment,a serious but also common topic for people worldwide, has been increasingly paid attention to in public.The thing that worries us most is that people increase the pace of economic development at the expense of sacrificing the environment, which give rise to the tragedy we see today .A quantity of plants and animals are faced with the danger of extiction .Whether this situation can be improved has aroused a spirited debate in society.