2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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Parents shouldn't help children do all things. They should be independent. Children is not young but parents are old. So children had better to be independent. Parents did a lot for children that makes them lazy. Children can not do thing if parents don't help them. In order to help children be independent, parents need try their best to work hard. Why not letting children live alone? Parents think of that is said above.