2010年12月英语四级作文真题:让孩子独立

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At present, many parents help children to do things. They help them do the washing, do the shopping, do the cleaning.They help them a lot. I think it is not good.Children should do their things by themselves. Parents should not help them. They should ask them to do something alone. What should they do? They should tell children to deal with their things independently. Sometimes it is difficult at first, but they have to do it. Children will grow up. They are too old to things by themselves. Parents had better them how to do it, because they are their parents.