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Fishing is my favorite sport. Although I always fish for hours but catch nothing, this does not worry me. Some fishermen are unlucky that they catch old boots and rubbish instead of fish, but I’m even unluckier because I never catch anything – even old boots. After having spent whole mornings on the river, I always come back home with a completely empty bag. “You should give up fishing” my friends say,”It’s a waste of time!” However, they haven’t realized an important thing yet: I am interested in the time of stillness rather than fishing itself.
