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Planes are driving me mad. I live near an airport and the horrible passing planes could be heard around the clock. The airport was built many years ago but could not long be used for some reasons. However, it finally came into use last year. Given the agonizing noise of passing planes, over 100 residents nearby must have been driven away from their homes. But I have stayed here so far as the few residents left. Sometimes, I think my house will be knocked down by a passing plane. Although having been offered a large sum of money to go away, I am determined to stay here. As a result, everybody says I must be mad and they are probably right.
