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文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；熟练的使用了从句和复杂句；学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒。
The importance of extracurricular activity Now for the undergraduate of study pressure that is very big,they need to find a way to relax themselves,so I think implement some extracurricular activities that is very important,it would bring lots of benefits to undergraduate. TO begin with,I think implement some extracurricular activities that is very necessary,because it would reduce pressure for undergraduate,even it is a way to relax themselves,in addition,it would drill their organize ability,when they are holding extracurricular activity,all the student need to join in it,it would improve their thought capacity and action capacity,it makes each other more band together,it also makes each other increase emotion.Another merit that is they can find some defect by themselves,they can utilize such chance to complete themselves. All in all,I hope that college should appropriate implement some extracurricular activities,whenever is student's spirit or physical,it would bring some benefit for them.
