2013年4月6日雅思大作文真题TASK2

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者词汇量积累不错，一些学术词汇的使用比较灵活，有个别拼写错误；作者应适量增加从句的使用量。

Our ancestors once expected that we would make continue progress in all areas of life one day,whereas we have not acheived this great aim which always inspirits those selfless people to give their short lives to contribute to our civilization incredibly. For example,the technology has improved a lot.The intention of it dates back to the ancient era before the establishment of the Rome Empire.If we want to travel 100 years ago,the choices are limited in several transportations with low speed.On the contrary,modern people can travel by air,trains,cars and so forth. In addition,the communication tools also change due to the improvement of the capabilty upon which computers deal with the data depending.The obvious different is the communication tools nowadays can make two people from diffrent countries to connect with each other. However,there are still some undeveloped areas in our world,such as the human rights. Our lives are full of rapes,homicides,wars and other evil bring the fatality to everyone.