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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；文中句式变化多样，同时从句使用很棒；拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用。
A major advantage and disadvantage of advertising on television Today it is explosive information age of we living,when we turn on television,it would show various advertisements,these advertisements would bring some benefits for us,but it also has a disadvantage. The television advertisement would bring which benefit for us?Firstly, I think it has brought some convenience,if the advertisement is your need,you can according to telephone number to connect seller,and then placing an order,it would save you lots of time,apart from such selling advertisement,it also shows some the public benefit advertisement,it would stimulate us to make some contribution for society,but television advertisement have a disadvantage,for some of production's advertisement are exaggerated,even they are false,if anyone buy them,he or she will be cheated and lossed,they would bring some harmful for consumer. So,the television advertisement have some benefits and also have some disadvantages,if people want to buy some things,they would think twice,then make a decision,they should be avoid cheated as possible as they could
