高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

丰富从句的使用，文章会更出色；全文结构较为严谨；文中用词稍显贫乏，文中存在一些拼写错误。

In the poss time,my hometown is very poor .the house is so low ,however,people feel very happy,we lived there feel comfortebal，we look the shy is bule and clean,the river had many fish,it looks clean. Now,the low house is fade away ,instead in the light and high house,the streat became white,and the streat have many cars.because of then,the river become more and more dertly，the shy become more and more black，in river‘s fish is die away。 my hometomn become terribal ，what can we do for our hometown！