题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;全文结构较为严谨。
September 22 2014 Just saw a job notice issued by the counselor suddenly I felt my heart burst into a dull throb.I suddenly began to think whether my capability qualifies me for a good job. Just like the news I saw yesterday:"Now college students will face unemployment after graduation".In many cases the reason why we students can not find a good job is we do not have the ability to match it.It is because we do not have to acquire new knowledge at the university that until graduation we do not have sufficient capacity,ultimately we can not find a good job. I always believed:"No pains,no gains".I often complain that my college did not help me to establish a professional orientation. But think about it,just because I did not have clear goals. If I have my own ideals and objectives,no matter what kind of environment I will work hard. As we all know,the time never come back.Since we can not change the past,so we can only properly grasp the future!