1995年专四作文真题范文:Discuss part-time job

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Discuss of part-time job Today some of college student's family are relative difficulty,for their parent's income are still lower,they have to take a part-time job in their spare time,that is the best choice for them,because it would reduce their parent's pressure,and never make them live a passive life. I think college student to take a part-time job that has lots of benefits,apart from it can reduce their parent's pressure,they can draw up a plan to save some money every month,when they graduate,they don't need to worry about money anymore.In addition,they can in advance experience the job,they would gain some enlightenment in it,then they would improve themselves defect,that is make themselves become more and more excellent,but it has a disadvantage,if they can't arrange reasonable time,it would affect their study. To sum up,mostly we should pay attention in our study,if we want to take a part-time job,we should be rational arrange our time.