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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12939
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章层次较为清晰;希望学术词汇的使用能更熟练一些,还要加强单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

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As the pitcure shows to us,there is the parent senting a massage to their son who is on the upstairs.What's more,they shows the miss to their son and wants to see him.In the fast develoment age,there is more and more people likely to communicate on the electonic commuication.So many younger perfected to share their words by the Weixin or QQ or Blog and so on.As for me,I can't agree more with the view that the electonic communication can replace the face-to face contact.The reason why I suppore this view can be listed as follow.First,the electonic communication can share the word that we can't speak to others on the face to face.Next,it can reduces the embarance when the people didn't know how to continue the topic.Last but not less,it has so many face and give people more time to share their words.

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