2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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With the development of the technology and science,computers are appearing in people' s life ,in this case ,online shopping is becoming more and more popular.Most people chose to shopping online ,most of them are young adult.But ,every coin has two sides,online shopping is not an exception.on one hand,it has many advances;In the other hand,it can lead to some problems if people don't careful. Shopping online can save people more time,so that they can do something freely,and there are many kinds of things for us to chose, of course,we may meet some difficulties that we don't know which should we chose,maybe it can cost more time .Last but not least,Internet is dangerous,our information can lost if we don't careful when we use it.