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Now there is more and more information that people can know by the internet, but not all the information is the truth. So when we see or hear the information from the internet, we should ensure the fact about the information first,or we might make some unnecessary mistakes. There is a example that we shouldn't get result at once when we just see or hear something. One day, a drunk man was insensible and was sent to the hospital. The doctor hasn't learnt the details ,so when he found the drunk man's pupills had increased, he told the man's family that the man was dying and he had tried his best. And just then another doctor said that the doctor ignored the fact that the man was a drunker. From this example we should remember that we must analyse the information seriously before we make decisions when we just see or hear the information from others.
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