2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

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With the development of social and techology,human and nature relationship is become a very important promble.There are different opinions among people as to how to deal with the relationship. some people think that it is too late about this promble.Human and nature relationship wanna come back the formerly is very difficult.In the social,city and techology is quick development already exceed nature can endure limits. On the other hand,other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.Although,social develop bring some question,but it is exist some beneficial human and nature relationship subject,greatly improve the environment and keep the relationship to be harmonious. In my opinion,we cannot live without nature.We must to learn how to deal with about human and nature relationship.For example,we can do some beneficial keep environment activiate and according to publicity let more people to understand the important of nature to us.