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文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；可适当增加从句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；请注意分段。
I had a letter from my sister where she said she would come to England next year. If she comes, she, who lives in Nigeria, will be amazed by the vivid and colorful picture: nestled in beautiful countryside, a cute new house with a number of large rooms in a beautiful garden being ablaze with fiery red roses. Work on the house had begun before she left, and it completed five months ago. Now it is a modern house – the only modern house in this district, though it looks strange to some people.
