字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用学术词汇;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
From what is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, we can see distinctly that while trying to catch the upcoming soccer, the goal-keeper thinks why the goal is so big. On the contrary, the striker simply deems in a different way, which is why it is so small. What makes such a big conflict on the same issue at the same moment? On the basis of my judgment, there are three factors contributing to it. In the first place, most of the people usually strive for the best benefits for himself when facing a difficult situation. Therefore, he will create some advantages which can gain the success to himself. In the second place, a great number people who have not critical thinking cannot find a good method to solve the problem in front of the dilemma. Apparently,what they can do is only fantasy. In the third place,a plenty of people do not want to try their best to acquire achievements which can lead you to success, thus they only want to wait and wait. The opportunity was slipped away when they are hesitating. In short, different people will have different views when they face a same issue. So we should consider the overall situations when we want to make a decision. Only in this way can we deal with dilemma appropriately.