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文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
How to Live a Meaningful Life? Among all the highlight topics, one is "how to make a meaningful life".As for this topic, everyone's opinion varies. As the saying goes, "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." I cannot agree with it more. In another word,if one spends all his life pursuing benefits for himself, he will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when he gets old. For example,from Nelson Mandela's life, we can get that he never wavered in his devotion to democracy, equality and learning. His life has been an inspiration in the South Africa and throughout the world. In a life that symbolizes the triumph of a human spirit, Nelson Mandela accepted the 1993 Nobel Peace Prize. In conclusion,his life, though limited, definitely lasts longer. That's a life worth living. Therefore, if there is a way to make my life more meaningful, I believe it should be to find something I'm interested in and also is helpful to others or the whole society. Last but not least,only in this way can I keep my passion in my whole life.
