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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；作者词汇量偏少，还要认真检查拼写；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
From the pictur we can see that one parent write to their child in internet, we know that many peoper communicate with each other on internet , so it is important that electronic communication for our life, but electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact. Firstly, face-to-face contact can close the relasionship bentew parent and chlid.Secondly, face-to-face contact can favrable talk our feeling for each other. Last but not least, face-to-face contact is favrable our thoch each other can feel each other. To sum up face-to-face contact is more important than electronic communication,electronic communication can't replace face-to-face contact.
