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my friend is xiaomei.she is a beautiful and a good woman,she has a son and a daught.I was first met her in our company,then we were been to friend.unit today ,we were know each other for ten years.she good at cooking,everything was delicious.i often to her home to enjoy her foods. we are never in hot water.i'm so happy that i have her .