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As everyone know college life is diffrent from middle school life, since I joined college I find the diffrence finally. In my perspective, there are some points as follows: At first,life in college is freer than it in middle school. My studying course reduced and my teachers don't limit me anymore. So, I get a plenty of time to do what l intrest such as drawing, playing badmiton , howere, in middle school I can do nothing except study. At second , college life is more colorful than middle shool. There have lots of diffrent clubs which offer intresting activities. In the first semester, I joined the history club and handcraft club and I've really learned a lot. Well, in middle school ,you are banned to take apart in any entertamaint activity. At third, you are supposed to be self-reliant in college. You left away your famillies and friends, you have to manage yourself , handle everything by your self while these used to do by your parents. In a word, life in college is diffrent in middle school .we have to adopt it however you like or hate.
