托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

文中词汇使用较丰富，学术词汇使用要加强；可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

I paint many pictures as an art student and welcome others' remarks on them. However, I can’t abide those who pretend that they really understand modern art by telling you what a picture is ‘about’, because many pictures are not about anything. Actually, they are just pretty patterns, and we like them just as we like beautiful curtain material. In my view, little children appreciate modern pictures much better than adults for their ability to notice more. My sister is only seven, but she always tells me whether my pictures are good or not. Yesterday she came into my room. “What are you doing?” she asked. “I’m hanging this picture on the wall,” I answered, “It’s a new one. Do you like it?” She looked at it critically for a moment, saying: “It's all right. But isn't it upside down?” I looked at it again. She was right. It was!