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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):有意义的生活

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:13浏览次数:9025
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Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
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作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文中能使用多样的词汇表达,也能较好的使用一些学术词汇;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。

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Among all the highlighted topics,one is "how to live a meaningful life".As for this topic,everyone's opinion varies.As the saying goes,"The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it."I cannot agree with it. If one spends all his life persuing benifits for himself,he will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when they gets old.From Nelson Mandela's life,we can get that he never wavered in his devotion to democracy, equality and learning.His life has been an inspiration in South Africa and throughout the world.In a life that symbolizes the triumph of human spirit,Nelson Mendela accepted the 1993 Nobel Peace Prize.His life,though limited,definitely lasts longer.That's a life worth living.Therefore, if there is a way to make my life more meaningful,I believe it should be to find something I'm interested in and also is helpful to others or the whole society.Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life.

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