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guizhou is a beautiful place that is surrounded by hills,people give she a beautiful name--spring city.my hometown is on the place. i have a good friend will to go to hometown ,she is favorite natural scenery and she will to go on a vacation together me. we go to visit the HUANGGUOSHUPUBU that is a splendid scenic ,i want to make a sentence describe the beauty which waterfalls three thousand feet.the scenic is very romantic and we is very cheerful that we may see a so grand sight .we walk through the massif and see waterfalls beat the stone follow big sound.we play water to each other and feeling very cool in the hot summer.we walked for some time and see a big tree ,we decide to take a picture in the under big tree .
