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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者在句法层面做的很棒；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Every one of us should be careful with our money on daily life As students, we should get the education on which we spend a lot of money from our parents. We have no ability on earning money so that the money we spent should be given from our family. It is generally so hard for our parents earn money to make a living that we are supposed not to waste money. Also，it is a great virtue to be thrifty on daily life, it is also good for us to keep thrifty because every one of us can't predict what we will be and the life is always not in a stone. If we are used to being careful with our money on daily life, we can be alive well while we haven't much money. It said that it‘s easy to turn from being frugal to extravagant but difficult to turn from extravagant to frugal. Keep a habit to be careful with money on daily life, which just only benefits us but not be bad for us. However, pay too much attention on saving money which may lead to become stingy with not only ourselves but also our friends. I think that will also cause a terrible result. For example, if your friend invited you to somewhere to have a meal together, but you are too careful with the money that you final refuse it without an acceptable excuse, your friend will not want to invite you any longer. If such things happened frequently, your friends will be away from you gradually but you still don’t know the reason if all of your friend tell you. In a word, we should be careful with our money on daily life instead of being stingy. We should consider that if the reason on which we will spend the money is necessary. If it connects your friends or schoolwork, don’t be hesitated. But if it is unnecessary, we should not pay much attention on it.
