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单词拼写很棒，可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Last Monday,my friends and I did a survey of the aging population. It's reported that the aging population increases 10% than last year. Now the young workers can hardly support the old people and children, so the government decides to increase the age of retiring to deal with the challenge. So what should we do? How can we stop the faster and faster aging population? Today I invite my friends to discuss how to solve the problem and write a plan to hand in. “I think we can find a way on extending the expectancy and try to strengthen the ability to work of the people who are in high age. So that they can earn money to decrease the younger’s burden.” Jam said. “I think what Jam said was true. And also we should do lots of excises as possible as we can. Because a healthy body can help us do everything better.”Bella follow-up said. “How about you,Susan? “ I asked. “Can mothers give birth more babies,then we will have enough manpower?”Susan said. “But how to solve the less natural resources? Also,you know, it’s a long time for a baby becoming an adult.”Jam disagreed. “I agree Jam’s. The population becomes more and more. Not only we can't increase the amount of babies,but also control the large population. What's the more, we must save the resources” In a world, we only have one earth. Protecting it is everyone’s duty.
