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How to cope with information explosion Just as the famous sayings goes,“A wealth of information creates a poverty of attention ” , which has pointed out the negative impact of information explosion . And the phenomenon illustrated should arouse great attention of all human beings . Information explosion contributes plenty of adverse effect to public . Firstly, a large of information , which is useless , will misguide people’s recognition . They might make mistakes when they absorb such information . Secondly , there are harmful information among all the information such as porn , violence and false advertisement . It interferes user’s choice when they seek for useful one . So how can people avoid being distracted by irrelevant information ? In my opinion , it’s essential for individuals to strength self-control ability , so that they could make the correct choices on decisions . they should set clear objectives , before they search for information online .