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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，但学术词汇稍显不足；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
We can always hear that the worth of life is not about the length but its value. But how make our life valuable? There are many kinds of ideas but the common idea is trying our best to come up with everything what we want to do in the limited lifetime. That is, we should grasp every minute even every second while we are alive in the world for the circumstances of the life are not set in a stone, which all of us don’t know when we will die, maybe we are healthy today but we suffer from something bad next day. I don’t think life valuably means everyone should do something great or do something benefiting humans. We improve the worth of our lives by experiencing happiness and sadness. The largest tragedy that we haven’t come up with something we desired and the potential have never realized since we born. We regret that our dreams haven’t come true until we face the death. Don’t hesitate，because we have no too much time to hesitate. The life is such colorful and the world where we live is such fascinating that we should experience to make our life more wonderful.
