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My pen pal Jack complained about something what has happened to him just now. He said he lost his job two days ago because of his unsociable character. I told him that he should try dealing with others if he want to make his career path more easier. He said that he couldn’t stand someone talking about him even talking with him. And he said that he tried to change the bad habit and he failed. I told that if you want to make a living in such a society, you should make yourself brave and try to talk with others. Believe you can do everything well but not always make passive self-suggestions. If you don’t believe in yourself and how can you except the others to believe in you? Then he told me that I couldn’t realize him and I couldn’t imagine how he go through such difficult seven years. He said that people who are around him always laughed at him and he was so unconfident that he was so nervous if someone talking about him. He told me that he is a person that has character with heavy self-respect and inferiority. After I finished watching what he wanted to express. I told that sometimes the heavy self-respect lead to being unconfident. He should make himself form a correct connection that what other said couldn’t impress him if he doesn't care about it. Don’t pay too much attention to what others said but try to increase his abilities in every region. Everyone’s life likes a play, and a lot of things include good things and unlucky things form it. Everyone will experience them and get lessons from them. We share our happiness with others if something lucky happened,also we ask our friends for help when we face hardships. But whatever happiness and sadness, everybody should experience them by themselves, whoever can not instead of you even your parents.
