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Late in the afternoon, the boys put up tent in the middle of the field. As soon as this was done, they began to cook a meal over an open fire. They were hungry and the food smelled good. After a wonderful meal, the night fell. The moon cast a bright light over the field, with the sky alight with millions of stars. Amid the ease surroundings, the boys told stories to each other and sang songs for entertainment by the campfire. But some time later, it began to rain, and they failed to resist the overwhelming feeling of tiredness, so they decided to put out the fire and creep into the tent. Their sleeping bags were so warm and comfortable that they all slept soundly. However, in the middle of the night, two of them woke up and shouted: “the tent is full of water!” What happened? They all leapt out of their sleeping bags and hurried outside, surprised by this view: the deluge had formed a stream in the field! The stream wound its way across the field and then flowed right under their tent!under their tent!
