托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

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it appeals to me that telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. i always regarded truth as my key to light road. some people keep their reservations that telling the truth is not meaningful because they conisdered sometimes lies could hurt people. however, they will soon regret when they realize that the significant of telling the truth. we live in the world which lies full of our daily life. in such a situation, the truth proves to be one of the most essential element in the 21st century. without it we might get in so many unexpected troubles. luckily, i always telling truth in my life so i could aviod so many bad situations. that's why i think we need always telling the truth. also, the truth will hurt us sometimes but the light of truth could never change, and this is what lies could not compare with. at this point, a true experience of me came to my mind. last year, my grandmom got cancer. it is very bed, when we know the notes, we all cried and dicided not to tell my grandmom. we told her, it is okay, it is not a problem. you will get better soon. but we both know my grandmom could not get though the winter. i could see her worries in her eyes, she knew that we told lies to her. then she tried to guess what kind of sickness she got sieriously? the situation inclinded so much. one day when i saw her cry in her dream, i decided to tell her the truth. after hearing my explantions she smiled and wanted to get out hospital, staying in home with her lasting life. when she got home the situation become better, she took excises everyday and her mood was good enough to have fun with my neighborhoods. in huge contrast, i realized that telling the truth could help people to solve problem not to aviod them know the truth. from this experience i do believe that we should telling the truth all the time maybe sometimes they will hurt us but the truthes could also help us to think out a good solution for such messy things. despite the advantage and disadvantage i showed above. some people still think that truth could hurt us so we should not always telling the truth. but if we take a bigger sight of the picture we might see the advantage is more than disadvantage. all things show positive and negative sides at the same time. so it is impossible to any of us to reach the absolutness. however, from what i said, i am apt to the idea the telling the truth is the most benificial consideration in our life.