2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

September 23 2014 Today I did a lot of things.The most significant thing is that I saw S.J.Horge's video about learning Englishi.In the video there are seven criteria about learning English. These learning methods are very useful for me.Because my English is very poor,it is difficult to learn English.But A.J.Horge's method is very suitable for me.Different from the traditional method of learning English.His method does not require learning very difficult English words and syntax,and only needs to listen to simple conversation and learn simple phrases.The most unusual thing in his method is"Learn with your ears,not your eyes". The best thing is that I can actually understand what he saying in case of no Chinese subtitles,and this gives me great confidence.As he says:"Learn easy English".I believe that as long as I keep learning simple English daily,the final results must be splendid. I know that People with goals succeed because they know where they are going.As long as I set the goal of learning English and adhere to the study,one day my English will be the brightest star in my life.