2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；句式变化较为不错，另外需加强句法练习；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Nobody don't want to be successful,but many people never become the person who he eagerly to become day and night.It is most likely that we all said "nothing is impossible". It is important to have a strong will to succeed,because only do you have a strong will,you can complete the doing of great things. not only need the strong will,but study do,If we don't study hard,we never succeed.