2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇；文章层次较为清晰。

In the modern world,Computer has become a part of our daily life.So,what do you think about the relationship of computer and human. In my opinion,computer has its advantages and disadvantiges to us.For its advantages,it can broaden our horizons and open a window to look out of big world.In addition,we can communicate with others,go shopping and study online,which is convenient for us.For its disadvantages,firstly,some teenagers spend a deal of time playing computer games instead of learning knowledge.Secondly,there are some awful picture and fake information,which has a bad effect on our mental health. No matter it is useful or not,it is totally up to you,isn't it?