2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm glad to hear that you are come to china.my hometown live in earst of china. My hometown is very beusetiful.i appreciate it if you come to my hometown.my hometown is very bule of the sky and sea.my hometown is very passion of ever people. I wish you have fun in china.