2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I'm glad to hear that you are come to china.My hometown lives in earst of china. My hometown is very beautiful.I appreciate it if you come to my hometown.My hometown is very blue of the sky and sea.My hometown is very passion of ever people. I wish you have fun in china.