2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；运用了一些简单从句，但不是很熟练；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

I'm glad to hear that you are come to china.My hometown lives in earst of china. My hometown is very beautiful.I appreciate it if you come to my hometown.My hometown is very blue of the sky and sea.My hometown people is very passion. I wish you have fun in china.hear the one two