文章衔接手法恰当;句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;学术词汇使用熟练,不过请注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;连词使用偏少。
In recent days ,with development of economy ,the widespread use of Disposal Bags ,through disposal bags is very convenient,but every cion has two sides.The negetive aspects are also apparent,One of the important disadventagesis that Disposal Bags caused serious pllution , and using Disposal Bags is becoming more and more serious . so we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation . Otherwise the knife will become much, much sharper going forward.