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nowadays,environment,a serious but also common topic for people worldwide, has been increasingly paid attention to in public.The thing that worries us most is that people increase the pace of economic development at the expense of sacrificing the environment, which give rise to the tragedy we see today .A quantity of plants and animals are faced with the danger of extiction .Whether this situation can be improved has aroused a spirited debate in society. some people hold the pessitive attitude towards the phenomenon that a host of rare plants or animal species are decreasing at a staggering rate and they think that nothing can be done to help ease the serious situation.many animals can survive on the earth for the simple reason that they are adapted to the specific environment . once their habitate change a lot,for example,if there are not enough organic materials in soil because of soil pullution ,then many flowers will not blossom the next year, just like people can not live without fresh air and water. Others,however,contend that effective solutions can be taken to help improve the bad situation.Honestly,lots of environmental problems can be solved ultimately as long as the reduction of the intervention to nature caused by humen can be taken into consideration, thereby improving the ability of plants' reliving. In my opinion,we everyone take the responsibility of protecting the environment and those who develop economy at the expense of the surroundings we live should be condemned rather than condoned.The government should give priority to the problem solving .I believe one day the whole world will become more comfortable for people to live with flowers here and there.
