学术词汇能比较准确的使用,不过拼写错误稍多;有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays fewer and fewer students pay attention to spelling in English. Due to many students are good at reading but aren't skills in word-spelling.Lead to this phenomenous have many factor. It is more master factor that fewer and fewer students attach important to write English essays, And, the goal of the students learn English word to speak and pass the examination which mean they just need to select similar words according to listening and reading in passager. The most contributing factor is the wide use to elecotronic devices such as the computer and students no longer need to correct the words by themselve. To sum up I think that we must import students write skill from write essays and diary,and them reading more and more the books to enlarge theri words. It is most important that student must cut out the hopay which rely on the computer.