2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the rapid development of technology,computers are permeating almost every aspect of our lives.There are more and more close relationship between human and computers. As is known to all ,people create the computers in the 20 century,which make people's live more convenient and effective.Along with the advent of computer,It is possible to order the airline-ticket ,shop and study online,transmit the huge money on internet by storing and exchanging datas in computer.