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The wonderful Beijing It must be Beijing where I will take him to if my foreign friend comes to china.Following is the several reasons. Firstly,as all of us know,Beijing is the capital of China which makes it be the most representative city in our motherland.It is not only the political center of the country but also contains thousands of years' culture accumulation.So,I think if you can spend some time observing and feeling the city,you must form a concept that how extraordinary the city is! Secondly,as it has been the capital of the country since Yuan dynastic,many grand architectures was preserved.Of all of the arts,the most famous is the Great Wall and there is a well-known word "He who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man".May be someone will think it is exaggerated,but when you stand on it in the flesh,it is likely for you to swallow your word.Except for the Great Wall,in Beijing can you also have a visit to the Tian'Anmen Square,the Forbidden City,the summer Palace and so on. Lastly,Beijing is also famous for one thing,Beijing duck.As a kind of food which have attracted thousands of visitors,it is now a symbol of Beijing.I believe it is not a bad choice for the foreign who resolves to have a try on Chinese food!
