小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Nowadays, there are more and more people going shopping on the internet and it has become a fashion.Why is it so popular with us? Many people rather  go shopping on the internet than on the supermarket in our real life because of its advantage.People who like shopping on the internet almost because we can select something we want and the price of the goods. Of course,  a part of them prefer it because of covenant. If we want to buy something on Oline Shopping and final we decide to buy it,we can only wait for it at home but needn't go outdoors.  But there are also a lot of disadvantage. The goods on the internet sometimes is not real and what we received is different from it. What's the more,the quality of goods can not be assured because we can  not touch them. In my opinion,everything has two handles,so we should judge it carefully. Don't be blind.If you make sure  that it suits and be good for you,don't hesitate,but if you can't, think over carefully.