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When I was a child, I dreamed of being an English translator. And I tried my best to study English when I toughed it first time until Grade 8. There were many classmates around me playing QQ or reading novels when I was on Grade 8 and they often talked about them in the classroom. I had been said that I learned English with my best until Grade 8,because I had been absorbed in novels and chatting on the internet since I contacted them. After that,I spent more and more time on them but decrease more and more time to study. Everyone should believed everyone will be paid for his ability, instead, if you don’t want work hard even spend no time on something, you will not success. Because of my laziness on study, I didn’t get an A in the middle exam, but I still abandoned myself in them resulted of my study was worth and worth. Finally, I failed in English in the final exam. When my parents knew that I spent a lot of time on novels and the internet, they had a conversation with me and told me that try to pay my attention to study but not concentrate on something is useless for study. However, I was rebellious with them because I thought that they never understood me and I was often discouraged to do a lot of things that I like. I was so imagined when I knew I failed the exam and I believed my parents must criticized me seriously. Something out of my thoughts, when I sent my report card to my mothers, she look through it and be silent. Then she raised her hand and I closed my eyes quickly, because I guessed that she was so anxious at me and wanted to receive me a dressing down. “Li, you thought I will give you a lesson, right?” One minute later, I open my eyes and my mother said. “Aren’t you angry with me, after all, I fail the English exam?” “Li, I think we should have aconversation to shorten distance between us.” When you was born, both your father and I were so happy that wehad never complained when we facedtroubles . later ,you grew up faster and faster with the time went by. I knew the teenagers nowadays have their secrets and hobbies that we can not understand. I also knew you disliked us interfering you and you are bored with talking to us because of the generation gap. But you should know, not we are too strict with you but we know something will bad for you if you do it. Every couple of parents hope their children can be happy forever and never blame them even they did something let they down.I hope that you can take a lesson from it and cheer up, etc.” I decided to get over the novels and internet and try my best to study again. Luckily, I made a great progress in all subjects. Thanks to my mother, I will try my best and never let you down.
