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【精析】
这是一份简历。和求职信类似,简历一般包括个人情况,教育背景,个人能力,目标职业等信息。在写简历时,一定要实事求是,不可夸大其词,要特别注意突出自己符合招聘信息的能力。另外,还要注意简历的格式和语言,格式要整齐明了,语言要简洁有力。
文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;熟练使用了一些长难句;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Li Ming, male, born on June 15, l986, unmarried, in July 2008, graduated from north university English department.During the period of school, each course is very good, have very strong English listening, speaking, reading and writing;The second foreign language is German, have the basic ability of German conversation.In addition, be familiar with the process of foreign trade.Likes playing basketball, singing and watching movies, desire for an foreign trade salesman.