广东江门市福泉奥林匹克学校2013届九年级试卷英语作文附范文

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I went to Zhuhai with my family last year. We enjoyed ourselves there. It is an extremely beautiful seaside city in the south of Guangdong. There are lots of places of interest. We went to Zhuhai Fishgirl. The scenery there is very beautiful. As a seaside city, Zhuhai is also well-known for its seafood. You can taste different kinds of seafood without spending too much money. I won't forget the days we spent in Zhuhai. If I have another chance, I will go there again.