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It is not wise to make a conclusion immediately when you just saw or heard about something.There are several reasons as following.Firstly,a wise man will come to a conclusion prudently because he knows that what he saw and heard of is not all of the things.Secondly,it is long time for many things to appear and develop in the world,so we should wait for the results with patience.
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